1st photo, if you cut it in half, and drop the top, you get a much better focus.
male model always (1,2,4,7) seem to not straight his neck (how should I say, like poking a chicken head out..) T-post not easy to post. The feet of male(front and back can make the shoulder better) also can be different.
#2 is okay, except the waterfall draw my eye to it (and the tree on top left)
Like #3 post, except the male hand 'broken' (by the female body) and suddenly come out (same as #1), again, the building kind of out there to make your eye out (from couples) and the right side flowers are same color as the dress, big distraction. The strong color/contrast is eye catching.
#4 The subject need to be the brightness (most contrast etc) of the picture, you did light it a bit, but its not enough, and focus a bit soft. Rather the tree (with straight line on top and stairs going to it) make it feel like a point of interest. That is also a problem with background: try to find a similar ton. Green usually pop out better than the brown and blue ton.
right arm of girl (combine with male hand) make it really big when you compare to her left. Either a separation there or no need for male's hand.
#5 Besides of lighting (hard... hot, a bit over) like the smiles and all, but too bad the hand blocking girl face. Never, never block the girl as usually she will be the 'boss' to pick picture!
#6 beware the 'ghost' (shadow of the male ) is very creepy. To better this picture, either create another circle, head and hands to echo the circle on top. (why we need the pole?) That will make a kind of '8'.
#7 again, head of male, lighting (face not light), no smile... Left side too bright too.
#8. best of whole, the blank part is a bit drawing out eye. The open of month and eyes of girl is great. The male part... feel like 'wood' (man,..) may be the ton of color temp too much 'yellow'? |
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